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Bleak Beginnings by =BobbyRC:iconBobbyRC:

Categories Photography > Miscellaneous

©2009 =BobbyRC
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Artist's Comments

March 25, 2009
Drove 15 minutes for this shot, though I thought the trees were going to be in full bloom. I dunno though, totally changed the feel of the photo from what I imagined.

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$chix0r Apr 20, 2009, 6:19:06 AM
I love the colours, you've captured quite the pretty palette.

Although I am no photography expert, and have no fancy words to describe how I think this shot could be improved, I find that my eyes are drawn over to the right side, away from the more important left.

Perhaps experimenting with different crops of this shot would give you the opportunity to bring attention to the flowers in the foreground in a more obvious way? It's worth trying and may very well bring a new deviation!

A good effort though and a shot to be proud of in your gallery for sure.
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Mood: Love ~Wendy018GD Mar 25, 2009, 1:08:14 PM
Amazing colourist...

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=BobbyRC Mar 25, 2009, 1:09:26 PM
Thank you very much, and for the :+fav:! =)
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=SpazzyDragon13 Mar 25, 2009, 2:23:35 PM
I think it works. ;) Love just that little piece of green in it. Really makes it pop.

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~nego7 Mar 25, 2009, 3:14:26 PM
So beautifull nice shot
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=BobbyRC Mar 25, 2009, 3:21:30 PM
Thank you very much! =)
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=BobbyRC Mar 25, 2009, 3:23:15 PM
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Thank you for the encouragement! :hug:
It's starting to grow on me. I might re-edit tonight, leave the color the same, but clean up some of the other branches to see how I like it.
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Mood: Love *HeroHosami Mar 25, 2009, 6:09:26 PM
Amazing job Bobby! I love the colours and tones. Keep it up! One thing though, the top of the flower is a bit washed out, other than that, no problems!

-Dan
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~Wendy018GD Mar 26, 2009, 2:45:50 AM
You welcome :)

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